But anyway, I hope you guys like it. I worked long and hard on this, and I'm pleased with the result. I just hope I didn't overlook any typos. If I did, please let me know and I'll fix it up right away!
In the first issue, Jericho was wearing white gloves. In this issue, and from now on, Jericho will be wearing fingerless gloves so that later on in the story, he can extend his claws out more easily without tearing the gloves. I just wanted to tell you guys that
I didn't exactly make the background textures on my own [sky and wood]. I took images I found and altered them to make them look like they're part of the comic. There's a tutorial on that --> manga-like clouds on Photoshop
I also altered the speed of the opening music track to make it fit "Big". I made it slower than the original track.
You can probably tell what inspired me for the issue 2 cover xD
I want to explain about Jericho's teeth. I really liked the "Supernatural" idea of vampires having a second layer of the sharp teeth growing over the original set, so I'm using that for the vampires in my story
Issue #3 Cover
"Whiskey on the Mississippi" Kevin MacLeod (incompetech.com) Licensed under Creative Commons: Attribution 3.0
"Sonic the Hedgehog" © SEGA
Big and animals [flickies, gorilla, cuckies, seals, and sea otters] © SEGA
Jericho, Zarek, Laraine, Fay, and Trisha © Tri-Jean
You made Big ADORABLE!!!
Not like others who make him dumber than a sack of bricks and always pining for Froggy to be near him.
Because I love your stories. Perhaps if you just corrected grammar and other slight errors; maybe just spruced it up a bit, you would feel better about it? I remember reading your stories anonymously when i was young- the ones where you would draw a scene and post the story in the description. I noticed that you don't have a lot of those old, old ones still up... I remember them so fondly~. It always was the best part of my day when you updated!!! In a way, it became part of my fond childhood memories~
also I love how you insert little flashback scenes with Jericho's father and also adding Trish at the very end was pretty nice too,All in sall this was a pretty good chapter
This comic made me laugh so much with all the parts between Jericho and Big, even the parts where Big punched him in the gut to save his life and when Jericho tried the fish and hated it. XD
Aww, poor Jericho. He had tears in his eyes as he tried the apple. So sad. And I could help but notice that your fursona's hair seems much shorter in this issue than how I've seen you draw it previously. But, then again, it could be how she truly looks and I just don't really remember it at all. Who knows?
So, anyways, I only have one form of criticism for you and that's on page 30, where Jericho says, "Being part Mobian, I must be immune to consuming food other than blood." I think you meant to say that he's able to comsume other foods and not "immune" to them, otherwise, he wouldn't be able to eat other foods at all. But, that's ok. You worked really long and hard to make this comic and I'm sure everyone knows what you meant to say. Believe me, I do that kind of thing all of time whenever I write or try to talk to somebody, lol.
But, yeah. Great job. I'll be looking forward to the next issue. ^^